Page 11 and all is well. Had a fun time with this page. A couple of nit-picking gripes. One I cant say as It would give something away later, but it invlves putting a word bubble over a little detail that comes important later in the story. The second is a bit of a style thing in the bottom frame. The background or the foreground should have been deemphasized to avoid overdetailing. But I had to introduce my recent albatross. The town of Arbors Station. As the charcters enter on the next page you will see the background details going up a notch, which has doubled my drawng time per page. But I hope folks will be satisfed with it.
I fnished the last page of Chapter 1, yesterday. I am scanning in pages for photoshopping as I type. Forgive me as I do a dance of joy as I get out of the night time setting back to the day. Its a lot easier to balance pictures without the shadows and dark of night rearing its head. If all goes well I should be able to make up my 12 page buffer again. Especially since the frames will be more talk than action for a while.
Anyway. Back to the scanning.