This was a fun page to draw but hard to edit.
This page and the next page suffered from accidently rubbing together in my art bag. consequently some smearing occurred. Not as bad on this page as on the next one but I had to do a lot of post rub cleanup before and after the scan.
I hope the results ended up usable. If you look at the middle right, you can see some of the grey remaining in the bushes that I had to eliminate in most of the rest of the page.